Thursday, April 27, 2017

Peer Feedback: Ivy Murphy



This is Ivy's short poem about her name.  I chose this poem because I relate so much with her about people always messing up her name.  It's a very candid poem that I really love, especially because it's free-versed and simple.  I like that Ivy wrote about her name because its a conversation that I've had with her from the beginning -- when I thought her name was Abby.  I love this poem and I don't think it can get much better unless she personalizes it a little more and maybe adds a rhyme scheme that makes it sing-songy.  Regardless, I love her poem and I love Ivy as a classmate and person.

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